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Stone Heart- Oneshot by Darboe Stone Heart- Oneshot by Darboe
a one shot made for school....strangely our teacher told us to realize a comic page so, here it is XD
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My first critique, so i'll try my best! Wow, this is quite original! I actually never thought this would occur, and in a strange way it's kinda refreshing. Some would say this was mean, but it perfectly fits her character of that girl (who isn't very nice). Poor cat.... it's cute, but charm doesn't work on everyone.
For a school project, it looks more like a professional one-shot- which is quite impressive. The style here is reminiscent of the Panty and Stocking style, and it is gorgeous with it's attention to detail. It makes you immersed in the comic and has a great use of shading, and even the cloudy skies in the background have shading!
The one issue that it has is that near the end the comic background fades, which is a shame since it's beautiful. For the interaction w/ the cat is okay to lack the background, since the focus is on the cat and the girl. Some would say that the last panel would have it instead of a void, but if time constraints were an issue it's understandable. Other that this, the comic is solid.
I hope I did a good job reviewing this one-shot, and I hope I improve in critiquing in the future. Despite minor nitpicks, this comic is fantastic- as Ksdestiny goes above and beyond with this! I can tell Ksdestiny is a great artist, and I wish her luck on her future endeavors.
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Vaatiwithblue Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really adore this kind of style. It's a really cool one-shot!
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Darboe Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thnx
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Vaatiwithblue Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No prob, so- what was the inspiration going into school comic?
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Hexidextrous Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
Poor kitty.
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hahah yess
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AsukaRose Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
She has Kageyama´s Glasses XD
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
hahaha ome true! XDDDD
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AsukaRose Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
xD
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POLISHhedgieFanGirl Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014   General Artist
oh, my she's so cruel :rofl: nice manga strip UvU
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thanks a lot!
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POLISHhedgieFanGirl Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014   General Artist
no problem!! UvU
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C-Survive Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Really funny, actually!
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank uuuu
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Sapphyriah Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student General Artist
By the way, I keep loving-hating your amazing bg skills
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
thank yaaaa siiissssss
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Sapphyriah Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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michaelthedragon39 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Now that's a stone cold person XD
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yes XDDD
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michaelthedragon39 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Evil girl XD
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Vaatiwithblue Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is this the Stocking style you were talking about?
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yes!
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Abyzz01 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awww poor cat QmQ
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Darboe Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
XDDDD
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